I can't get over how great the art is! So much care, attention, and detail was put into the backgrounds and character portraits alike, and the VN really shines for it~ I also appreciate not only the careful use of color and fuzzy lining to make everything feel visually soft and comforting (or not, when the story called for such), but also the clever use of lighting and distortion on the backgrounds to add more visual dynamism to the scenes, heheh~
The sound design was quite good, too! On top of the music itself, which was all very pleasing and matches the scenes well, the text printing sound effect had a very satisfying aural weight to it, if that makes any sense, heh.
Also, the twist at the end regarding the true cause of Orchid's transformation was well-executed~ If only Orchid had managed to pull her head out of her ass a bit sooner, and just communicated properly with Lune from the start... though, if she were capable of that, I suppose none of the events of this story would've happened in the first place, now would they? Heheheh~
Very nice work! I hope to see more from you in the future~