First off, I really loved the car scene. It's such a cool twist. Reminds me a lot of Christine. I also really liked the graphics. On a more negative side, I think that the final part with the car was a bit too complex. I died a bunch of times and that took a lot of the horror out of it. I also think that the game could've used a bit more polish on accessibility and atmosphere. It was really hard to find some of the crime scene locations. I personally would've added some kind of a marker/light or other kind of way of more clearly seeing the locations. Maybe a ! that pops up when you are near one. And I also think some environmental sounds (like a car running or a light post humming) could've added a lot.
On the whole, I think this is a cool game, with a really good premise. It just needed a bit more polish.