Earning money is not intuitive, the dialogues are fun to read but there are few images compared to the text. The time between work and dialogue sequences is not optimized, it feels like the game artificially increases the time for each story sequence to play out. The work part is the worst part of this game, it is too repetitive and gets old quickly.
I'm not trying to give you a negative review just because. I think you have a great talent, not only for coding but also for writing, however, the experience is not cohesive at all, which lowers the quality of the game. The game is not bad, the execution could be much better.