This was a pretty good chapter. Caelan is pretty much untouchable now. We still have to figure out the language trick and arcane within him, or at least find a good excuse to remain mute in front of the chief who will probably try talking to him in Tigerii.
Kael, IDK if you already know this, but you have an amazing talent for writing. I know you do the art and direct the music, all of which fits so beautifully together, but no other writer comes close.
Many others use great descriptions, but none use so many thoughtful phrases. Your writing is clear, easy to absorb, and not at all out of rhythm or touch. If often takes me a while to get comfortable with new authors, quite like finding a comfortable position to sleep in, but you on the other hand make the feeling come on instantly.
There is only 1 other writer who I can read for +12 hours in a day. What's more, I absolutely love the setting and concept of this VN. Ive been a huge fan of English, Irish, Scottish, and Welsh culture. It feels homely in a profound way, as if my soul was born in those lands. The language you use, the way the character speak and interact with each other, and even some of the art/concepts make this VN feel as if I am really living among such a culture/setting. Many jokingly say Mad Max's setting is relatable to the world we are living in, but I say it with all seriousness: FBTW Really feels like a cloth of history covering my eyes, and is my perfect escape.
Im looking forward to monthly releases.