Woah!!! This is awesome, I love the story of this here. The endings are so sad though omfg you were not kidding about the tragic part.
Jory is the best beefcake ever and he deserves the world. Please give me more Jory.
I finally understand what you meant about a Hell of an antagonist haha love it. The UI is also gorgeous, love it. Kudos to your team!
Some parts threw me off a little (partial voice acting leading into no voice acting, it happens), some parts were probably too info-y for me and sometimes the dialect of the mermaids threw me off but overall I enjoyed this a lot!
(also this is unrelated but you might want to update your screenshots with the rendered versions of the guys)