So... there's a few things on this.
First I'll get the positives out of the way: I love this. The artstyle is great, and I actually enjoy the stills, instead of regular animations. Ive read you had some trouble in that department, but I believe you're able to get much more details on the stills whereas normally the animation might look too "different".
I also really love the characters. James is awesome, and the banter between you and the middle sister can be very charming.
But, here come the problems I have. I know the game isnt finished, so maybe these will be finished at some point:
1) Story progression doesnt always make sense, with the wrong dialogue/story playing in the end. In first playthrough I failed to go on any path (I slept with everyone except the sisters/mom), and I just ended up skipping days, until suddenly your character declares he's moving away, saying goodbye to everyone.
On a third playthrough, I ended up with the youngest and middle sister... and after the middle one tried a wedding dress, we skipped about a 100 days and suddenly she's pregnant, and the elder sister is suddenly BACK with her asshole boyfriend (despite having broken up with him over his office adventures) before.
2) I dont have sound. Im not sure if this is by design, but its kind of disappointing to have to run background music. Fortunately the Katawa Shouju OST is good enough, but its still a missing element.
3) cant believe Im saying this but... the amount of sex is sometimes really distracting. Early on its kind of exciting when establishing some form of connection, but now I realised that anything female in this game that isnt Mrs Steele is willing (very willing) to just fuck you. The two friends of the youngest sister, I understand. They're sluts, they have kinks. But suddenly, boom, the cousin wants a piece too. Then the random bar girl. Then the bar girls mother (and even the brother if her stories are to be believed). Then the nerd's mom, the yoga instructor, etc etc. I understand its an erotic visual novel but this kind of feels like overkill. Plus, Ive realised that almost anytime you turn someone down it kind of makes it seem like your character is an asshole for doing so.
4) it ook me 3 playthroughs to somewhat figure out what the corruption stands for, and even now it's not very clear entirely. It seems like an interesting system that could have been explored a bit more.
5) For the life of me I cant seem to figure out how to go the elder sister route. I got rid of that asshole, but after that, and the game on the beach I never interacted with her again. Not ever. I got a scene where she and the middle sister got into wrestling, but nothing else.
6) sometimes it seems the routes just... eliminate certain scenes. I didnt get the james confession during my first playthrough, so the sudden comment of a threeway with Ana kind of blindsided me. On the THIRD playthrough I DID get that scene though. I have no idea why that scene wouldnt be there. It seems like a rather important part of the story.
Anyway, Ive greatly enjoyed this so far and I hope for more content and a finished product at some point. The art is amazing, and the dialogue can be very amusing. There are some typos every now and then, but nothing that ruins the experience for me. So thanks!
[edit]
Lmao, okay so... Riley just moved in, the game ACKNOWLEDGES that I met her through the job at the supermarket... yet the elder sister is still planning her wedding. I think I broke it into the 4th dimension
[edit 2]
(oldest sister): "You're not all seriously considering this are you? I have a life here. A fiancee"
Yup. 4th dimension.