Thanks for the extensive review! Really glad you enjoyed the dialog, writing is the element I enjoyed the most about developing the game.
All the points you make are certainly valid. Sounds like you hit on quite a few bugs too. I'm still fixing things on the many paths and rely a lot on player input. If you happen to have saves at various points of your playthrough, I'd be very interested in loading them to debug the game. You can reach me at perverteergames@gmail.com if you'd like, or upload the saves to some hosting service and link them here if you want.
As for music, it's a little late to add it now, because of the sheer size of the game. My next project will have music, by the way.