Five stars for theme implementation! This is a really clever twist on an existing formula, and with a little bit of visual, balancing and gamefeel polish this would probably be 5* almost across the board - great jam entry! Bonus points for being so keen on constructive feedback!
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I’d look at more dynamic visuals, maybe with some particles, responsive environments etc. just to make the jumps have a bit more oomph. It’d also be interesting to iterate over the jump and the general physics of the game.
I had a look at the form but I don’t think it’d be able to give a meaningful response - I’m not the target audience for this kind of game, I just appreciate the effort and taken to make it.