I like it. I do usually put anti-chafing cream before I run OP, you don't have to worry about my legs. Narrator's got some character. I do wish there was a little more monologue at day 150 or something after he says goodbye. I'll go replay Stanley's Parable real quick.
Hope you're not talking to yourself there OP. (:
Glad to hear about your legs. Chafing is truly the unspoken terror of running from your problems
Totally agree about throwing in more dialogue later on - I'll be the first to say I rushed this out because of deadlines but I am very very happy you like it (and bloody flattered that it gave you Stanley's Parable vibes!) :)
