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Really nice game... The environment looked good, the gameplay was quite tense and over-all the game seemed good... During my gameplay I encountered the following inconveniences :

1. The car in the image below is looking a bit weird, I think it need a bit of thickness, because some faces were inverted and I could see through them. This problem is optional, because I was wondering in the word looking for an item and I thought that the car maybe had it... (Optional)


2. The toilet were looking ok, but the water in them was looking good... I know that maybe you wanted to simulate a realistic "flush of the toilet", but in my opinion it made the game look unpolished... I put 2 images below :



3. A little problem with lighting... The chandelier had it's lightbulbs looking like they are on, but the light is off... (by this I mean that they look like they emit light effect is on, but the actual light is off).


4. The gameplay was ok, but didn't engage with me... I personally think that it was a mild horror game. I was hoping to get at least 2-3 jumpscares with a creature walking at incredible speed on the hallway, but the single jumpscare (that it wasn't actually scary) was that white bed sheet that was supposed to scare me... I walked around it before the end of demo screen pop-up...

5. At this point the game felt more like a "walking with a lighter in hand simulator" game and I really felt bored... I also found a bit frustrating the speed that the character was walking to and it was a pain to have to go from room to room at that slow speed without the possibility to run even for a few second (the stamina will also need to be shown by a loading bar that depletes when you run and fill when you walk normally...

6. The game was a bit too blank and the mechanic with the lighter can be improved if you add a limited oil amount in it an also let players find cans of oil along the gameplay...

7. The "search in trash" mechanic need a progress bar because I didn't know how much it took to the player to search in it and I had to do it twice because at first I didn't know if it done something until the second time when I got the text "There is nothing usefull here".

So this is my opinion on the game... I don't want to sound rude, the game is nice and I feel like it was made by a beginner game-dev (I am not a master in videogames myself), but this review serve as a point to improve this game... I can tell from the gameplay that IT CAN BE IMRPOVED to the point where it can attract a lot of players... Just work at the monster look (a bed sheet is too basic) and keep implementing more original jumpscares (make the monster walk on hallway with a fast movement speed) and I will guarantee that it will improve you game 5 times.

Thank you so much for playing our game! Regarding the jump scares, the fast-moving figure in the hallway is a classic scare tactic, and while it’s popular, we have plans to refine it for our full game. This is just a DEMO, but we definitely aim to make it scarier. We also appreciate you taking the time to playtest and identify bugs for us. We’ll be working on fixing those!

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Yep. Your game, your idea... but just make sure to make them scary! :D