I think this game has great potential, and id like to post my thoughts and ideas
- I think the scene when you are turned into the girl is hot, and their should be more of that in the future, perhaps you suddenly awaken in a dungeon/cursed cellar as that form and have to break out.
- I think it was too easy to break out of the house, perhaps when you open the back door, it reveals itself to a endless garden of weird ghost creatures, get all House of Leaves with it, the front door suddenly leads to a labyrinth of you find a jack to raise the bookshelf that almost falls on you, The windows, when crawled through takes you to the other side of the house, or a version of the house that is flipped, hallways stretch to infinity as wax leaks through the walls and wax/shadow silhouettes of women in binds reach out for the player, stuff like that. Perhaps you could incorporate the previous point, and perhaps have the female version/possessed version of the player stuck in an endless garden of Eden where they can either try to escape, or form a pact with the main spirit, Idk, I'm just spitballing.
- The wax theme is a really interesting theming for a ghost, do more with it! the main char cant leave their house because the front door is coated in wax, candles suddenly appear where the ghost is stronger, and lighting them with the lighter can attract its attention, assuming the ghost even wants to not be seen.
- The into feels kind of like a slog, and feels rather confusing, perhaps you could shorten it?