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Honestly a really cool game, I see it going far!

With character designs as simple but as fun as these, I wonder how you haven't set up a patreon for funding this! not that I'm complaining, I don't have the money to put where my mouth is lol.

Ill make my suggestions quick;
- I feel like this game could work really well as like a roguelike in a similar vein as The Binding Of Isaac, perhaps you can find certain alchemical ingredients that change the effects of your potion, or magical runes that when arraigned in a spellbook (the character would have by default), provide certain effects to the spell casting, dependent on where the rune is in the spell, or something idk

- That main char is hot, I kind of wish they got to use that pussy they are showing off in the opening title lol, unless I'm missing a "You died and are lying on the floor to be taken advantage of" scene (which I am almost certainly did as I did not die once.)

- Speaking of that; The game is a wee too easy with a single enemy, add some cat archers that dart around the room and collapse to show their quaint pussy, or some Court magician foxes who slowly charge-up high damaging AOE fireballs, Perhaps some tentacle monster of somekind, or a bear with a huge shield that blocks most attacks from one side, Add doors that enemies watch and spring into action when opened, add traps that fire magical beams and arrow-slits and caltrops, and some boss fights, those would be cool.

Other than that, I love this project, and hope it gets to see a bright future!

Also; i did not know the lube was on the desk, you should mention that stuff like that is in  game, if at all.
IE; instead of saying "Perhaps if i had some lube..." you could have said "If only i had the lube back on my desk..." or "Perhaps if i had some lube... I guess ill just have to buy some tomorrow." i didn't even know the lube existed till i read the walkthrough.

I think this game has great potential, and id like to post my thoughts and ideas

- I think the scene when you are turned into the girl is hot, and their should be more of that in the future, perhaps you suddenly awaken in a dungeon/cursed cellar as that form and have to break out.

- I think it was too easy to break out of the house, perhaps when you open the back door, it reveals itself to a endless garden of weird ghost creatures, get all House of Leaves with it, the front door suddenly leads to a labyrinth of you find a jack to raise the bookshelf that almost falls on you, The windows, when crawled through takes you to the other side of the house, or a version of the house that is flipped, hallways stretch to infinity as wax leaks through the walls and wax/shadow silhouettes of women in binds reach out for the player, stuff like that. Perhaps you could incorporate the previous point, and perhaps have the female version/possessed version of the player stuck in an endless garden of Eden where they can either try to escape, or form a pact with the main spirit, Idk, I'm just spitballing.

- The wax theme is a really interesting theming for a ghost, do more with it! the main char cant leave their house because the front door is coated in wax, candles suddenly appear where the ghost is stronger, and lighting them with the lighter can attract its attention, assuming the ghost even wants to not be seen.

- The into feels kind of like a slog, and feels rather confusing, perhaps you could shorten it?