Hi Rachel ๐
It is sweet and well made story, relations are indeed difficult this shows it well.๐๐
I really like the music tracks especially the one in the bar at the beginning, characters and backgrounds and beautiful, at first I downloaded both version but after a bit i clearly noticed that the newer version was better so I gave up on the first version.
I think my favorite character in this story is Almudena even if she not the main character, of course Delaney and Kevin and Trisha are great too.
I noticed a few typing mistakes in the names of characters as they speak, 3 with Delaney speaking when its is Trisha and 3 with Delaney speak when it is Stephen ๐