Really cool, wildly original. I feel so confused and emotional haha. It was so eerie!!!
First off, I used to work nights and you captured so many small details of that life really well. Especially right near the beginning, describing how jarring and weird the busy world looks when you're SO used to dark and empty streets. I've never heard someone put that into words before, really cool.
The perspective aspect was really different and really cool. I liked that it kind of felt like... How do I put this, in the his mind he's in "work mode" almost all of the time?? Like, even when at home and going about tasks he's thinking of tasks in a "work mode" kind of way. And that felt so real!!!! TOO real haha.
*Spoilers*
I really liked Mike! I'm bad at names so the fact I remember his name speaks to how nice and real he seemed. When the Red Text talked about him reaching for the gun under the counter my heart sank. In a wild way, I was almost disappointed that the game didn't end with the funeral speech. Not that the rest wasn't interesting, but the game has that "narrator" tone to it and it would have been a really gratifying explanation for why we the audience is being "told" this story.
I didn't fully understand the anomaly part of the game, like I'm not sure at all what the Red Text was and what it meant. Was it real? was it not? I don't think it was the main character the whole time. ONLY based on the game description on the game page did I pick up that there was some kind of anomaly and resetting happening? I remember the top right screen saying different chapter numbers but... I don't know maybe it's just me but I felt like it never clicked that things were being "reset" in any way with the chapters. I assumed really I was misunderstanding what chapters meant in the context of the game, or it had something to do with the POV of the cameras.
But I don't think "Getting" the anomalies or what was going on was super important to the plot. I felt emotionally attached to the characters, the people of the town and the growth arc of the main character. I get the struggle of sleeping all day and feeling like life is flying past you because of your sleep schedule.
Wild to pull this off with VX Ace. Love that engine. The way the screens moved and loaded in looked SO cool. I liked that the vhs type filter distortion was only on one part of the screen, that can get really overwhelming on some ppls projects. Not a lot of gameplay, per se, but it was a really great story!!