Very cute game! I love how puzzle and myth are intertwining, it is such a cool way of tellyng the story of Orpheus and Eurydice :)
A couple of points that I'd like to give feedback on:
- I would love to see more of the characters in the game! I thing it would be cool to have some voice reactions maybe, or some intro...
- or even their interactions! This could add a bit to the immersion and overall impression, imo :) Or maybe there could be the gameplay reason why there are two of them? Like now they are climbing the ladder but in terms of the gameplay there is no difference if there was only one of them going up. If there were puzzles that included both of them doing something different, that might be fun!
- I think it is a perfect combo of skill and puzzle. I only got a feeling that the last level seemed a bit harder compared to the other ones, especially because there were much more notes available. Maybe a smoother transition to this last level would be nicer. Or maybe fewer notes to choose from :)
- I think it would be easier to get used to the controls if they didn't change completely every level, but rather that we used the same keys every time and some new keys would be added to them. Apart from that everything seemed quite intuitive :)
- I felt a bit unsure about moving your screen up and down, maybe it would be better for every puzzle to fit into your screen?
- The tutorial was very nice btw!
- You can see the "well played" text before you actually finished the game, as you accidentally get a look at it at some point :D To me it seems better to get it only after completing the last level, as after I saw it, I got really impatient and a bit confused, as I now more concentrated on this writing instead of listening to the notes :)
- I liked the visual style, but it appered to me that the characters got a bit lost as their outline is not that thick as the outline thay you use for the other elements. Maybe if it was the same for everything it would be more balanced :)
Great game overall!