Such a great theme and writing! It's always fun to play something where everyone instantly gets the vibe. Also glad you included a Steps to Play at the end - they're always so helpful, and I wish all games did it.
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Oh you definitely should! I'd suggest just trying it as-is, and seeing what naturally feels like you need to add. You mind end up removing stuff in the end. Maybe even simplifying the Ability descriptions to the first sentence, etc. But perhaps just see how it works as it is in the new format first off?