Thanks so much for the feed back. I'm thinking of making this into a zine, is there any thoughts you have on how to smooth it out or what I might add?
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Oh you definitely should! I'd suggest just trying it as-is, and seeing what naturally feels like you need to add. You mind end up removing stuff in the end. Maybe even simplifying the Ability descriptions to the first sentence, etc. But perhaps just see how it works as it is in the new format first off?