I liked the writing. I rarely find games like this interesting, and I was irritated that nothing was happening as I was free to explore the entire ship without anything happening.
Then I realized, I didn't talk to the first person. And having context of where I was through the other rooms I went through context helped me understand the narrative even more. So despite my initial failure of paying attention, it made me enjoy the game more! hah - It did feel more like a comic book than a game, but sometimes that's all in its presentation.
Well done!