I am not playing a lot of platform games so I can't help you much in terms what exactly do better but I can say that I feels ok in general. For sure you can look more into pixel size consistency in art, character is looking good but some other parts like house or boats feel a bit weird because of this lack of consistency. Also change in music during the storm would be helpful. To be fair at first I didn't recognize it to be a storm while being focused on not being shoot xD