Really interesting story and lore going on here. Also great that you all decided to continue with the story. The only critique I have is that the goblin attacks need some more love. Right now it was quite confusing what was happening. Maybe move the goblin phase to a new screen that shows goblins actually attacking so that some more visual feedback is given instead of text popping up in the little stat bubbles. Having more story during the attack phase is a nice idea, but right now it was hard to focus on both the story and the attacks happing.
Overall I gave you quite a high score, since I do see some good potential