OHHH! A Visual Novel! And you seem to be participating in the Spooktober Jam as well :D All the best!
I'm currently playing your game (Still jamming to the background music in the Main Menu). By the way, did you use an engine when writing the game?
Here's my submission for this game jam, but not for the Spooktober. I'm still working on my script and art :P I would appreciate it if you leave an honest review so I can improve it in the future: