Nice game, very textual and explained, I really encourage you to Use a Title UI where you show the title of your game, explain the mechanics and the game goal, try to use images about your game theme, a brief story about the condemned, and buttons to play the game, settings button which may be contains sliders to control the volume of the sound or the lighting, and the credits button to show the creators of your assets used in your game, fantastic idea, you can win this jam.