Of course! I'd appreciate getting your feedback. You can DM me here: https://x.com/chysa_art
Since X/Twitter is being a butt (No DMs unless we're mutual friends, same on TikTok) I'll just offer here.
There's some inconsistencies in the game, some grammar issues, and a handful of misspellings. Possibly some code issues as well since choosing one option will sometimes bring up dialogue as if the other option was chosen. If you need someone to look it over and correct anything, I'm willing to help. I can even do light coding and can probably fix those few choices for you. Plus I'm free.