I think the lore was great, the dialogues. I think the other parts could use a little more, like i think there should be a sfx playing when going to the next dialogue, to add a little feedback, also a battle like audio during the "battle" would really add to the atmosphere of the game.
I didn't understand if keep playing it for 6 days would change the dialogues or show the rest of the story, but it seemed like it didn't. In the future I would love to see the rest of the story.
Great game and design!!