Great art and sounds! It's awesome how you made all the assets fit together.
Here are some random thoughts of mine (you don't have to address any of them, I just wanted to share these):
- hitbox is not obvious, but small enough to make it fairly easy to stay safe
- the speed in focus movement felt too fast, with very little difference from normal movement
- what is that in the bottom left corner? this random number does not seem to affect the game, or being affected by my actions
- what is rank? and why does in go up as I die?