This had an almost noir vibe that I really enjoyed! In terms of mixing, don't be too hard on yourself :) I'm not an expert, but I would suggest bringing the melody more front and center - it felt kind of far away as I was listening while the drums were more central in the mix. Maybe also choosing a stronger voice for the melody, the ones you chose tended to be softer and have more reverb. Once the groove with the claps came in I wanted to dance!