This is a really nice visual novel! The art, especially the characters, looks great, and the music and audio all work well too. The musical theming for the story and powers is fun and well done. If you plan to keep working on it, consider joining Magical Girl Continue it jam! There's more info in the MGGJ discord, but it's a somewhat relaxed follow up jam meant to keep the creative momentum going... it'll probably launch officially toward the tail end of the rating period.
Nice work!