Liked the writing. The jumping as well as interaction mechanics were very clean.
I think to improve it, the dialogue during the game could be skipped to the end of what the person has to say, then continue. Currently the only option is to just skip the line entirely before it even finished typing out. It would be better if it was possible to, on continue, automatically type out the whole line instantly. After it has typed out, then go to the next line of dialogue when pressing continue again. Other than that, nice job on this!