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Hi, I don't think your game is really great, but you deserve congrats for making an adventure game within a week. The biggest issue in my opinion is the contrast between the dramatic theme (a father looking for his missing child) and the dialogues and graphics - characters feel verbally and graphically inexpressive despite the serious thing that's going on.

The gameplay is minimalistic but that's not an issue in my opinion. I don't know if I'm the only one in this case, but during sequences where you have to drag objects into their respective slots I often had to retry dragging some of them before they would be put in.

Hope this feedback helps, and good luck on your future works !

thanks for the feedback. The drag and drop was a bit weird to set up. What do you mean by retry just putting them on the spot again?

Hi yes exactly, I had to retry putting some objects onto their spots several times.

yeah that can sometimes happen. You have to go to the middle of the spot. That's the best place to tr