Nice story and feel to this game! I'm not sure if you intend this to mostly be a visual novel style or have more action adventure, but the player might feel they have more of a part in the conversations if you occasionally give them a multiple choice options, where they get to pick the next thing that is said. You could still have a linear story, but you'd have a little bit more immersion. Anyway, this is pretty well done so far, will be interesting to see what you do with it in the future!