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Since you made multiple tracks I'll write separately about each.

As the Fog Clears:

Really great almost meditative quality with the repeating layers under the leads

When Sprits Come Out to Play:

Have to say when the track started with the piano and big bit crushed synth I really felt like I was playing Celeste 😄, only thing I felt could use some tweaking was the repeating walking bass part that gets a bit boring after a while.

Bioluminescence:

The muted guitar strums with the delay was really cool, liked it a lot! But I felt it could've maybe ducked away a bit after the intro, since it steals the attention from everything else as it is now in the track (at least for me).


Enjoyed all the tracks but As the Fog Clears was probably favourite with its meditative feels. Especially liked all the little monkey voices moving around you recorded, really adds a lot to it (some of the shorter ones almost remind me of a seagull😁).

Great job on these!

Thanks so much for listening! This is really good constructive feedback, and I think you make some good points. Changing up the bass line on the second track would definitely give it a little more life, and I definitely get what you mean about the delayed harmonics. I appreciate your critical ear!