The presentation and mechanics worked great. As others have said a way to guide the player a bit would really help. I felt like I was just wandering around and typing the same words over and over. Took me nearly a half an hour to finish the first mission. I ran out of time so unfortunately I wasn't able to finish but I enjoyed the writing and the story that I made it through. Great work!
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Thank you for the notes! I certainly lacked in giving the player guidance, or even much feedback at all regarding the progress they make. I'm already working on those issues - in future builds communication should ideally be very clear through both the writing and the mechanics. I'm sorry I ran your time, but I am glad that you enjoyed the experience!
Hey Vimlark, I have a new version of my game that is a lot more clear about what is happening and what to do next. This should improve your experience. There is also a completely redone first level with a lot more to discover. If you enjoyed the writing and the story (for which there are now 7-ish endings) you should check it out!