Hi, I like the story, but I would like to suggest you find some proofreader, there are quite some easily preventable typo's in the dialogues
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Hi I don't know at all how the production process works, but perhaps writing the dialogue in something like Word or Libreoffice with a spell check, and copy paste from there in whatever makers the RenPy magic work could take out most. It feels like most slip in because your are simply eager to advance the story and release a next version, which I really appreciate!