Just finished up what you've got so far, and FUCK! The writing you've done for the story is amazing, honestly I would've enjoyed this game even without the adult aspect, absolutely loved the story. And honestly forget the comment about the MC not being attractive enough, I think most AVN authors try too hard to make the MC ridiculously attractive and I think it is better with the average look. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see where the story goes.
I get that, yeah, I and I really enjoyed that for the game, making a main character overly attractive kinda throws away the feeling of some other aspect causing his ability to make even Naomi unable to resist, which made my brain work overtime and really wonder what the cocktail he was injected with did to change him, and I absolutely loved having a vn make me think so deep about something.