An intresting game for sure here is some feedback
- Checkpoints: Probably not the only person bringing this up but reapeting long sequences especially of just doing nothing interesting is a no go.
- Ending: I scrolled a bit to check and yeah the lack of ending really hits hard, but one thing I could recomend is to put a note on the itch page (kinda like the once I have for web performance) that will tell the player that the game doesn't feture any ending as some could spend much longer just trying to find something there isn't which is no fun.
- Blank Slate: Now this can work for many games but it requires some setup, but here it's quite hard to feel yourself in the shoes of the protagonist, some cool ways would be either making him a character with some inner monologues ( so just some comments about stuff that's happening he would make) or actually showing him to the player as there is no shadows for the player nor can we see any part of his body, I mean he doesn't even makes sounds when running so we feel more like a camera with headbob rather than an actuall human.
But either way a great submission ( I don't know if I could do 3d for a jam at least not this good )