I liked your play on the title, and the thumbnail is funny. But the lack of visuals, misplaced hyperlinks, and the overall story is messy. But overall, it's an effort, and lot's of work is needed for improvement.
(edit: changed my review to reflect on the update)
4.5 5/10 - Gameplay
5 6/10 - Design
4 5/10 - Story
5.5/10 - Comedic Value
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4.75 5.375/10 - Overall Score
Im really just playing around with the concept and not taking it that seriously, thanks for the feedback tho.
The visual are made mostly with powerpoint art and paint.net, the only valuable visuals (atleast to me) are the ones in the npcs and the IDEA shop, the misplaced hyperlinks are really because i rushed them a bit. And the story is meant to be just a wacky goose doing uncharacteristic things in a quest for his bread.
This is my first time trying to do comedy so i would love to know what to inprove in that aspect.
Thanks for the feedback and have a good day! ;)
edit: btw i loved crossy, i may review it tomorrow
