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Alright Fox, here it goes. I'm listening to yours for like the fourth time and now I'm ready to finally leave feedback!

Having listened to it four times, I have to say, it's quite listenable. Because it's of high quality, I'm going hardcore with the feedback and listening closely, part of why I've listened to it so many times.

Track 1:

Constructive feedback - the voice that comes in at 1:48 sounds maybe a little close in the mix.

Track 2: 

2:42-2:57 is a really nice passage. Just personal taste and not actual feedback - my brain wants to hear a push into some accidentals or going a little modal, or sharping it a bit to really emphasize it. I actually think microtones might be a next step for you, getting a good sense of where to pitch bend, like it would bring out a lot in your work to add some tonal texture to the sound effects you use. 

Track 3:

I think the same feedback with the voice I have here - it sounds close and maybe muffly? It's not *bad* and it definitely works. It's just like I feel like it could use a bit more zest to bring it more fully into the mix somehow. Your ear will probably pick up on it after you spend time away from it.

Very cool dark vibe though.

Track 4:

My mind wanted to hear a modulation down to VI, maybe also down to iv from VI. That's just me, and something for you to consider playing around with if you so desire!

I guess it might be a taste thing, but for ambience I might have wanted some of these tracks just a bit wetter on the reverb as well, but a clean natural one to just bring it all together a little more.

Really though, fantastic work. I listened many times so I could start to zoom in on the things that started sticking out to me.