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leogrl1938 days ago

This was unexpected - but a Lovely surprise! You continue to Wow me with your writing; you have such a talent for description. The way you portrayed the blood stone and pact and how that process felt was Breathtaking. Just downright- - Gorgeous.
Love how my MC is shaping out and the dialogue/pacing remains delicious. I’m naturally interested in (Princess for me)Kieran since you gave us a cheeky lil teaser on who they are - - and I Love complicated attractions —but I really like Samira too. When she wasn’t just - Charmed by a flirty MC, I was impressed/intrigued! I like that your character isn’t an exception~ Also wondered if Farah was on the spectrum (which would be amazing); I could see it.

Can’t wait to see more of the characters (feels like more family’s coming up) and hopefully more ROs! So interested in their depth and how they fall into this wicked plot you weave. ;)

FenofCattails36 days ago(+1)

Thank you so much!! I enjoy trying to do lyrical descriptions (thesaurus is my best friend) so I'm glad to hear you liked them! ❤️

Complicated attractions are fun and that's what I had in mind for Kieran's romance/friendship arc. :D And Samira isn't often too impressed with a very flirtatious mc lol--she deals with Aurynn on a daily basis and doesn't need two of him.

I hadn't written Farah specifically with that in mind, but I don't mind if you'd like to view her as on the spectrum! I could see it fitting her. I do intend to write some of my other characters with autism in mind, though. :)

More family will be coming up in the next update for sure--like mc's mother for one. And the rest of the ROs will be introduced in chapter 2! :D

I hope you continue to enjoy it as it's updated! Thanks so much for playing and for sharing your thoughts--it really makes my day!! ❤️❤️

leogrl1935 days ago

We love a cheeky thesaurus use~ ;) I have my thesaurus out Constantly, so that hit me on a spiritual level lol

Agreed! In fact, they’re my favorite type of romance barring ‘they're Perfect for each other, yet still can’t get their ish together’ kind. I already have a feeling I’m gonna like Kieran because Aurynn called them ‘soft’ and ‘puppy’ . Love me an ice queen with a sweet, creamy center~ But it also depends on if K doesn’t care about the effects of this war (and particularly MC with all their incredible loss); if they’re just an ass, I won’t be attracted at all. It’s actually why I’m looking forward to Kieran/Samira poly — that’ll be REALLY Friggin Interesting. (And give some lovely balance.) Because - why is SAMIRA attracted to K?? 🤔👀 I did think that was Exactly why Samira wasn’t about that flirt life haha

I love that you write with something like autism in mind! I have autistic and ADHD friends and they really opened me to seeing those (potential) traits in people. Personally feel like we’re all on a spectrum in some way; can’t wait to see the characters you intended it for (if we haven’t already)!

Yasssss, MOM. Bring on the complex familial relationships. It’s a shame so many siblings died as it seems the Mothers(TM) were very much conspiring against each other/ensuring their child was number one. Couldn’t have been easy establishing sibling bonds.

I’m so glad to see that! I’m sure I will with what you’ve given us thus far~ Thank you for commenting back as well! ❤️🤘🏾

FenofCattails32 days ago(+1)

I wouldn't worry about any of the ROs being irredeemable assholes lol--Kieran may come off as cold and standoffish, but they aren't a complete dick. ❤️

I gotta think about all the poly dynamics and how those will flesh out throughout the story, but I think Kieran/Samira will be an interesting one to write 🤔

The mothers definitely made things hard between the siblings, always trying to pit each other against each other, but the sibs managed to stay really close regardless. 😌❤️ MC will be able to choose whether their own relationship with their mother is close or strained.

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