Alrighty. You get the "the better something sounds, the more critical feedback I have to offer" treatment. Haha.
Mix quality is through the roof. You're performing magic here, where it starts to sound like it's clipping but its like its totally intentional and works incredibly well. I think perhaps that effect was maybe used more than necessary. Your insane sense of space is absolutely apparent. I love how well your ears are trained.
At 1:39 I think my ear wants more with that bass line coming back in, like playing a crunchy bass note an octave or a sixth below it, and maybe a bass hit that reverberates for a long time to pull all the elements together and develop on what came before it.
I actually had a an idea for the voices that come in there too... what if you increased the stereo width dynamically so that it moves from the center to the sides? Something about this spot I want to have it come in and expand the space, like maybe the reverb size is increased here. Whatever the case - this spot to me feels like it's the climactic moment when the core piece of this world is revealed.
Fantastic work!