Congrats on the submission! That's a very interesting gameplay loop, I like it!
The only feedback I would give is the camera control and maybe some sound effects, some typing SFX, some gibberish when the npc talks, if you plan on continuing after the jam I think it would definetly put your game forward! For the camera control, it felt a bit wacky sometimes, maybe using the arrows to rotate so you can still fully use the mouse?
Good job!