Vocals are super cool! Love the driving string rhythm at around 1:10, comes in at a great time in the composition. The plucked instrument sounds very nice in the mix too.
I think the talharpa could be a little louder in general.
This is more on arrangement but ~1:37 it is the first time in the track that we hear the talharpa take on 100% of attention, and it just gives the impression that something more could be done with that space created. How it continues playing the same way it was during the crescendo makes me feel that if a down beat was established and everything except for the beat was faded out, the talharpa could come in on a nice upbeat with some cool line and it would have a stronger effect.
I also wonder what it would sound like with more variation on drums, since it seems to always have a very long reverb, when it might sound nice a little tighter in some places. The ending might irritate me ingame lol.