it was interesting, found a few typos with Melfa mc said "Not every woman, tough. Just the gorgeous ones." tough means durable while though means however. Melfa also said "He was killed by monsters while trying to protect that bitchs." either that needs to be changed to those if there is more than one and bitchs needs to be changed to bitches or bitchs needs to be changed to bitch if it is just one. I can tell you are still learning the engine but I liked the game overall.