Okay. This is super simple yet super effective. I love the child like drawings complimented with the child like dialogue, it really brings out the innocence of the story and the character and offers a depth to the story that otherwise probably wouldn't be present.
The horror element is just a cheap jump scare but tbh i'm not mad, definitely inspiration from the scary maze game even though it wasn't a maze.
I would just make it a bit more user friendly by stopping the player from having to click to keep progressing the dialogue as it is quite a bit of effort to do so when you aren't getting much out of it in terms of gameplay. So just set the slides on a timer so it moves on once the dialogue is over. This isn't so much of a game as it is a children's book story.
Simple yet effective visuals that compliment the story and character.
Good use of audio in the jump scare.
Simple yet powerful story.
Just make the transitions less "Spam click to get to the next dialogue" and make it so the slide changes after a timer until you have the multiple choice paths. :)