I love a detective story, and I love a tortured main character who has to work through his own past! Your descriptions are well written, and I really enjoyed these lines: "The neon underbelly of Mumbai is where dreams go to die and secrets go to fester. You've got a snitch, goes by the name of Chhota. He's a weasel, but he's your weasel, and tonight you need his particular breed of gutter wisdom. " I think you do a very good job at quickly setting tone and familiarizing the player with your world and characters. One thing I'd recommend is, if you have the time, go more in depth on the events of the investigation; I feel as though after I talk to Rosie, the pace of the story picks up a lot, and I would like to see the main character go through the motions of doing things like collecting evidence or infiltrating the secret gathering. I played through the game twice and got favorable endings, and I like that you give the detective a chance to heal with his wife. Overall, pretty good!!