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Great stuff!  

I appreciate the limitations of the text format of this Jam.  But if the game receives further revisions it would be helpful (for me, as a visual learner) to have a flowchart for how the questions and conversation work.

There are also a few problems with the markdown that are a detriment to the final layout.  That is really trivial, though.  

I love the passage of time and the growing permanence of untreated wounds.  Very good stuff there.

I think some of the 'Outcome' questions could be rephrased slightly to emphasize implicit exchange.. Especially the first one where it seems to easy to answer "no" and narrate any happy outcome as may be desired.

Overall, this is wonderful.

Thank you! You’ve made some good points here, especially about the flowchart. I’ll chat with my co-creators and see if we can’t release a visual aid too