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The visuals are stunning. I love the box art and game menu. And that menu song...*chef's kiss* I really liked the story. It felt unique and the art complimented the vibes. Consider starting the story with a recap of a past murder on a different holiday. You also had a few typos like "Knowing that the major said we must..." - sounds like it should be mayor. Overall, GOOD JOB. This was a jam game so typos are to be expected, especially since you had such a branching story and your code editors don't spell check. 

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Ahh thank you sm for playing our game!! 🖤 And yes we will definitely take note of this because this game will have an update where things will be fixed/added carefully. We are also not native English speakers so grammatical errors are really expected. Thank you for the feedback!! 

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As non-Native speakers, you did phenomenal! I couldn't tell from the writing. <3