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Really enjoy whats written so far, will definitely love seeing it progressed.

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Thank you so much! <3 We can't wait to write more of the story as it progresses. If you have any feedback for what we can change/improve, that would be much appreciated!

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Of course! I do think the story has an interesting concept though obv we're still early in the vn. I did notice in the convo between dane and thistle they had commented on the pay and how folks avoid the rifts twice which made me think i had accidentally scrolled back lol. And as another had commented, stuff like sound effects definitely does wonders to help with immersion which could be something worth looking into. 

I am curious though, especially it being a mostly linear vn and noticing the romance tag, is there romanceable routes? Or is it more story focused

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Thank you so much for the feedback! We’re really glad you’re enjoying the story so far, and thank you for letting us about the repeated dialogue—definitely something we’ll keep an eye on to make sure the pacing flows smoothly.

As for the romance, yes, we’re working on incorporating romantic routes, and we’re even thinking about including an affection system to make the relationships more interactive and dynamic. There’s still a lot to come, and we hope the romance elements add a special layer to the story as it progresses!

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I think that all sounds like a good idea, will definitely enjoy seeing those features included and seeing how the romance will be included.