Hello! thanks a lot for your feedback.
1.I hear you for the grammar, it's a real issue for me.
2.Concerning the proportion of the male character and it's face , it should stay fix for now. For the other characters I have the bad habit of changing the height of the characters for certain scenes (without changing their proportions or height, only in relation to the ground). I will try to curb this habit.
3. That's noted, i will work on that.
Yes you can follow me on my patreon page: https://www.patreon.com/smallcoffee
I will mostly post my update there.
Thanks again fo your comments! :)