Perfect little VN for Spooktober, it has a really cute art style that contrasts nicely with the melancholic MC; for such a short game the complexity of the story is really good, I felt I was watching an amazing movie or reading a really good short book, the variety of endings paint a really good big picture too.
Now it did had some English translation errors but just now I am reading that it was your first time translating, and it that case it is a very good first try and all the important details can be understood.
Keep up the good work!