Still enjoying it, Perverteer.
I'll list other typos or glitches here:
Making love to Liza at the pool: "Her pleading eyes make you want to grant her witsh."..sb wish
First day back on the island with everyone: Susan say, "I think so to." SB too.
Opposite mistake at the wedding dance, when Iris says, "we have a life together to look forward too." SB to.
In the extra scene between Susan and Adriana, you say, "...her tongue is so far up Susan's cunt that Adriana is almost unable to breath." SB breathe.